HF: The Day We Left Daddy to Go Grab Milk

Haiku FridayA bedtime story
Can open the door to whole new worlds
Young minds delighted

Plot, characters, storyline
All paint a picture

Then, it’s weeks later
We walk in a store — loo break
Just for Daddy though

We start to walk on
“Ian, don’t drop your sandwich!”
“Daddy will find us”

Innocent wee mind
He left a trail of Subway
Damn Hansel, Gretel!

You don’t think they hear
Or understand an old tale
I’ll take stones next time

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10 responses to “HF: The Day We Left Daddy to Go Grab Milk

  1. This is adorable! Love the Hansel and Gretel comment in it!

  2. Aww, how sweet! Such a smart kiddo!
    Great Haiku, it made me smile!

  3. Made me smile. Broadly.

  4. Little smartie! That is so cute! Great haiku. 🙂

  5. a fun haiku and a precious story!

  6. lol. at least the birds got fed!

  7. Hahahaha, that’s just too stinkin’ adorable and awesomely told in haiku, too. Made my day.

  8. hahaha very sweet! happy weekend 🙂

  9. It’s so sweet that Ian wanted to make sure his daddy would find you all! Well done Siobhan!

  10. Awww, that Ian’s such a sweetie. And, did Brian follow the trail he left? Or did he even notice?

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